Improve[]
I added the improve template back to the article. It mentions humiliation twice, and that other people found content it mentions funny, but doesn't really say anything funny itself. It's just sort of a weird listing of not-facts. It also isn't very long. I would recommend adding more humor? Like, maybe you could talk about his troubled soul, and how upset he is that nobody can ever truly love him... because he brutally murders and devours all of his girlfriends. Or something. That's just an idea.
- - Billy Arrowsmith (Talk), 02:25, 11 July 2009 (UTC)